My roleplaying

[&;;the bird||]

I kind of want people to judge on how I rp. I don't know, I just feel like I haven't been rping that well.

The sound of paws beat against the moist ground. The undergrowth of leaves crunched against the mighty paws of one cats itself. Many other cats, a count of two followed. Many cats turned to hear the sound of the pitter-patter. Paws moved slowly as the cat moved across the undergrowth, searching for anything. Leaves, mold, a mouse or two, a squirrel, anything that she could get her white paws on. Marigold, do you think it is ok to be in this clan's territory? one of the rogues Tattered asked his voice fainter then a muffled leafs russle. Marigold's golden eyes flickered against the glare of the sunlight as it beat down into the forest and the undergrowth's moistness was starting to dry and crack.

It isn't a complete paragraph but a little part of an IC I am going to use for my apprentice Marigoldpaw.

[Blaze(y)]

I don't think there's anything wrong with it. It's really descriptive and thought-out. There are very few spelling errors, and it gets down to the point of the post. I think it's fine; nothings wrong with it. At least from my perspective, though. Some other people may have different opinions.

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Er.. don't be afraid to use ,s and 's, okay? X3 'Cuz this post is kinda lacking quite a bit. Theres about one or two spelling mistakes. Other than that.. it's okay.