Deathmoon Moonclaw Medicne Cat

[Deathmoon]

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Name: Deathmoon

Age:18-30 moon’s I don’t know what to base it on. But a younger, like the age of Cinderpelt.

Gender: She-Cat

Clan: MoonClan

Rank: Medicine cat

Description: Deathmoon is white all over. In the moon her pelt is white but with a hint of gray. She is battle scarred, one of her ears is ripped in half, and along with this she is missing a claw on her left foot. There is a scar over her left eye. [Like Scar off the lion king.] Her eyes are deep white, and somewhat resemble the moon. In the dark they always have a hint of blue. She is a long haired cat, with a pink nose.

Short Description: Pure white and battle scared.

Personality: She is calm most of the time, and in the face of danger. She is very caring; only because she has lost love ones. Being a mentor she is very stubborn. Being a medicine cat he has compassion, and loyalty. She is a sweet cat who would help everyone. No matter the Clan. She would jump in the middle of a dog pack to save kits, any kits. She still considers herself a Junior Medicine cat at the half-moon. She can be intimidated.

History:The death part of her name came from her mother. For when she was a kit nearly everyone around her, including her littermate, Battlekit, and her mother, died. She was very depressed. And moon came through the devotion to her clan. She still tried her best even though her past is marked by death. She never knew her father; her mother took the secret to the grave.

She generally meets her mother and brother in her dreams.
She has always wanted kits.


Role Playing Example:

“Amberpaw!” Deathmoon shouted. “Come here!” Deathmoon saw Amberpaw walk in slowly. DeathMoon shook her pelt, clearly annoyed. She hated her emotions showing though. “What are these?” She heard Amberpaw gasp. “I thought you’d know. So why are they in here?” There was no reply. She walked beside Amberpaw. “Now how do you get rid of Deathberries?” She heard the right reply. “Good. Now go!” And if you die, it’s not my fault. But I won't live long after.


Crush: I’m not allowed to love, unless you want me to.

Other: Nothing really. I’ll change anything.

[{~.::§ilver::.~}]

Ok, you need to fix the personality. A fix the short-description as well, take a look at other bios and see what they put.

EDIT:// ACCEPTED