Smokepaw - StormClan (DOPTED)

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Name:Smokepaw
Age:6 moons
Gender:Tom
Clan:StormClan
Rank:Apprentice
Family:Father - Ashstar - ShadeClan
Description:
Smokepaw is a very handsome orange tabby tom. He has very dark green pools that almost look like the leaves of the forest. Smokepaw is long-haired, and has a long tail. To match his tail, he has ears that he still needs to grow into, and whiskers that are very long. He is also short for his age, with small paws, but a large heart. He has no visible scars, and looks like his mother, though her eyes were sky-blue.
Short Description:
Handsome Orange Tabby with Forest Green Eyes.
Personality:
Smokepaw is like Crowfeather. He has that attitude towards others, but he has a kind heart. Once you get to know him you would fall in love with him. Smokepaw loves to run, and loves to stay out at night, watching the stars above. He is troublesome, and is more of a Leader than a Follower. Smokepaw wants everything to be his way for it's his way or the highway. Once in a while he'll let other have their turn, but only often. He is a loud-spoken cat, which gets him into trouble a lot. Smokepaw is mischievous, but he is very smart. He likes to formulate plans for battle, and loves to make up his own hunting and border patrols.
History:
Smokepaw was born to a StormClan she-cat and a ShadeClan tom. His mother died from giving birth to him and his four other siblings. Slowly, the other four died in front of him and his father. Not wanting to create a war between the two Clans, his father, Ashstar, took Smokepaw to StormClan. Smokepaw's foster mother raised him, and when he was four moons old, she told him that she wasn't his real mother. Smokepaw took this real hard, and became sick.
When he was better, he was told that his mother had died and so had his siblings, and that his father was in ShadeClan. Smokepaw hasn't yet met his father, and wishes to very much. After a while, a couple days before his Apprentice Ceremony, there was a rogue attack on the Camp. His foster mother died protecting him, so now he is left alone. He plans on joining his father's Clan when they meet, but until then, he must live in StormClan.
RPG Example:

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The silent night said nothing except for the trees brustling in the howling wind coming from the north. Only if you listened carefully would you find something chirping. Silence filled the air, just as a single cricket chirped its song to another. The moon, finally in its rightful spot in the sky shone down upon the world as the Twolegs were asleep while only a single apprentice was not in his bed this night.

A single beam of light shone down, but the rest gave the field a wonderful glow, making it shine with its brilliance. Slowly, a shadow creeped along the field, making sure not to expose itself. Until only soon after did it come into the light revealing the StormClan apprentice, Smokepaw.

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